Dear Ms. Langley

Dear Ms. Langley,

I believe I deserve a 90 for these six weeks since I have been doing my work even though I have turned in my essay works late to wordpress. 

I was mainly focused on reading my books for these six weeks because I wanted to get better for my goals and not wanting to drop it even half way through it. I was reading Call me by your name by Andre Acieman for most of these six weeks. I enjoyed it a bit but probably would not read it again.  I also branched out to start reading mystery genres since I thought it was time to try something new and shake up my reading genre habits, since looking back I mainly focused on mythology/fiction in the young adults section. I honestly need to give other genres a good look without any bias.

For my writing I say I got a bit better at focusing on just writing no matter what distractions are tempting me away until I actually let them. I want to say I haven’t really gotten better at cranking out essays in a small time frame though unless they are like the AP Collegeboard test and I have like 3 and ½ hours and it is also being handwritten. I can’t say that I am an amazing essay writer since I mainly forgot the differences between the three different types of essays we need to remember for the exam. For the synthesis essay I have to say it was kind of weird trying to write it out since it is similar enough to how I mainly write out like DBQs except it more of not formatining it to historical events and to whatever the prompt is and in that case eminent domain. Each essay was hard on its own but I have to say it mainly the argument essays are probably the easiest to write since they are basically picking a side and defending it. Rhetorical analysis the only main hard part is remembering the triangle and using it focusing on the message or purpose.

I can’t say that I was the best student, but I want to say that I tried really hard for these since most of these from the books we were forced to read during this year to the essays we had to write were very draining. Overall I want to say that I worked really hard even if my writing makes it seem like I haven’t. That is why I think I deserve a 90.

Synthesis essay

Eminent Domain is the government’s right under the Fifth Amendment to take privately owned property for public use – to build a road, a school or a courthouse for examples. Under eminent domain, the government buys your property, paying you what’s determined to be fair market value. In recent years, there have been many debates over the suitability of eminent domain, and further its legality in specific instances. The government is allowed to seize personal property for private use if they can prove that they are doing it to serve what’s called “the public good”.

One instance of eminent domain being used by the government and it was challenged in court and was able to be a win for the sufferer. “When Canal Winchester offered Richard “Pete” Stebelton $9,249 for a 1-mile strip of his property, Stebelton thought the payment was too low.” What Canal Winchester wanted to use part of Stebelton’s property for was to build a bike path between Rager Road to a swimming pool.  “It used eminent domain to take a strip of Stebelton’s 80-acre property and hired an appraiser who determined that the $9,249 would be enough compensation.” “Instead, he went to court to challenge the village’s valuation.” “The jury decided Sept.20 that the land the village wants, along the northern edge of his property, is worth $37,000. But the jury also decided that by taking it, the village was also closing off a back entrance to the property and damaging the value of the rest of Stebelton’s land by $558,625”.(Narciso) 

A separate but more of the government using eminent domain in a more positive ruling for them. Would be 2 different court cases. One of them is the Kohl v. United States in 1876. “The U.S. Supreme Court first examined federal eminent domain power in 1876 in Kohl vs United States. This case presented a landowner’s challenge to the power of the United States to condemn land in Cincinnati, Ohio for use as a custom house and post office building. Justice William Strong called authority of the federal government to appropriate property for public uses “essential to its independent existence and perpetuity.” Kohl  v. United States, 91 U.S. 367, 371 (1875).”  “Condemnation cases like that against the Gettysburg Railroad Company exemplify another use for eminent domain: establishing parks and setting aside open space for future generations, persevering places for historical interest and remarkable natural beauty, and protecting environmentally sensitive areas”.(U.S.Department of Justice)

Last is more of the horrible ramifications that can happen when the government uses eminent domain but none of the promised things that were used to justify it, never actually come true.  

Pipeline essay

President Biden’s decision to deny the pipeline to be finished is a bad decision. The Key stone Pipeline is a huge pipeline that would be coming from Canada cutting through Montana, South Dakota, and Nebraska seeing that it would be adding to the already huge existing pipeline. The existing pipeline runs through North Dakota, South Dakota, Nebraska, Oklahoma, Kansas, Missouri, and ending in either Illinois, or Texas. The Pipeline is very controversial for the fact that it affects not only jobs but also the environment and there are a lot of people who support President Biden’s decision  who only care about the environment.

The Pipeline will bring many jobs even if it is temporary. The State Department states that at estimated about 42.000 jobs over the two year time it takes to be built. 3,900 would be in actual construction everyone else would be more indirectly affecting it, such as food service. Though it is estimated that it would create about 35 permanent jobs. The report states that the pipeline would bring about $3.4 billions in the U.S. economy. The State Department review concluded that even if the pipeline were not built, global oil demand is such that companies would continue to develop the Alberta oil sands and bring the petroleum to market in other ways. The oil could come by rail or by building other pipelines. But moving oil by rail has its own hazards. As transport has increased in recent years, so have explosions of rail cars carrying oil.

Building the pipeline would also help provide a conduit for oil from a friendly ally, Canada, and cement trade relations for the United States and Canada. “The Government of Canada continues to support the Keystone XL project and the benefits that it will bring to both Canada and the United States,” Canadian Ambassador to the U.S. Kirsten Hillman said in a statement. Alberta Premier Jason Kenney said on Twitter that he is “deeply concerned” by the reports signaling the cancellation of the pipeline. “Doing so would kill jobs on both sides of the border, weaken the critically important Canada-U.S. relationship, and undermine U.S. national security by making  the United States more dependent on OPEC oil imports in the future,” he added. Construction of the pipeline is well under way in Canada, with the international border crossing already complete, Reuters noted. And the U.S., work has begun on the pump stations in every state along the path.

The oil industry characterized the move as the latest turn of the screw in the long-running legal battle. “Pipelines like KXL are the backbone of our nation’s energy infrastructure and one of the most environmentally sound ways to transport the fuel and petroleum products that power America,” said Robin Rorick, vice president of midstream operations for the American Petroleum Industry, which lobbies for oil companies. “The pipeline has passed every environmental review conducted for it. In fact, a total of six assessments by both the Obama and Trump administrations concluded that KXL is safe to build,” Mr. Rorick said. “Calls to conduct identical environmental reviews makes no sense and are a waste of tax dollars.”

Cite:

https://www.theblaze.com/news/biden-kill-keystone-xl-pipeline

https://thehill.com/policy/energy-environment/534675-biden-pushing-to-cancel-keystone-xl-pipeline-as-soon-as-he

Pipeline paragraph

President Biden’s decision to deny the pipeline to be finished is a bad decision. The Key stone Pipeline is a huge pipeline that would be coming from Canada cutting through Montana, South Dakota, and Nebraska seeing that it would be adding to the already huge existing pipeline. The existing pipeline runs through North Dakota, South Dakota, Nebraska, Oklahoma, Kansas, Missouri, and ending in either Illinois, or Texas. The Pipeline is very controversial for the fact that it affects not only jobs but also the environment and there are a lot of people who support President Biden’s decision  who only care about the environment.

Reflection Letter/Dear Ms. Langley

I feel like I’ve gotten at least maybe a little better grip on my reading habits. Since I am more focused on reading even though it is focused on one book that is required for this six weeks. I felt that I didn’t have enough time to write my essay for the Bluest eye novel and I should have added at last one more quote in my essay but I wrote a lot of information and the essay was pretty long, so maybe I really need to cut some stuff out of the paragraphs. It really seems that I have a tendency to over write for my essays right now not only in ela but also in history since I feel like I need to cram so much into them and I have a limited amount of space to use.

I feel like reading comprehension quizzes that we are doing in collegeboard are sort of helping in the way, but it mainly the actual understanding the questions is harder, since it seems that answer A. is the right now but when you get the results the correct answer is like D. and the answer is talking about true loves kiss and the whole writing pieces the questions were for were about robots and technology.

For reading The Bluest Eye by Toni Morrison it was sort of eye opening I guess. More of the different ways to write switching points of views between different narrators for a pretty famous novel and not outright stating which narrator it is and leaving the readers either confused or on a hunt to figure out how is speaking. I have to have the novel amazingly written for the different flashbacks for certain characters that are actually pretty important to the story even though how they’re flashbacks are kind of jarring for me since I was mainly listening to the novel as an audiobook. The only thing that really irritated me was like when Soaphead Churchill had the like couple of pages going over his story and his minor character just mainly pissed me off and made me hate him, even though even I try not hate every minor character and give them fair chances it mainly has to do with how he was portrayed for me is the thing I can think of the irritated me the most.

    I honestly am not sure how these skills are going to help me for the AP exam but honestly all I am hoping for is I don’t just blank out in my mind and bomb it since I basically forgot everything that was completely important for the test.

    I feel as for a critical thinker I haven’t really been the best I could have possibly been for this six weeks since Toni Morrison’s writing really scrambled up and messed with my head. Probably since I am so used to reading to certain types or maybe styles so they don’t really force my to be out of my comfort zone and make me to us my head to think deep meanings in things that probably don’t have meanings, or are never supposed to be connected in the first place and I am trying to force them to together. So I think I deserve 89 for this six weeks since I mainly feel like I should have been on my top A game and I fell so off that mark. 

Dear Ms. Langley

I believe I deserve an and 85 to a 90. I have been doing work for English even though I haven’t been turn my work in. I have been doing my work and the Toni Morrison essay was pretty hard since I wasn’t really sure that was even my best essay writing so far, I honestly feel like I could do better but like on a different topic.

These six week have been a little hard kicking bad habits since we are all not in person. I feel little better that I am reading a little more, even though they are for school. As a writer I think I progressed a little bit more since the last update even though it during class. For reaching my goals in reading I would like to say I am slowly reaching there. I was mainly focused on reading The Bluest Eye by Toni Morrison, so I wasn’t reading any other books sadly.

Though for writing as a whole I feel like I have gotten better even though we haven’t really been writing anything yet. I feel like I will very differently for the essay for the novels we just read in class.

As I feel for everything else we are doing in class to prepare for the collegeboard exam I want to want and see since I don’t want to accidently jinx myself, I honestly feel like the stupid multiple choice questions are hard when they are asking for things and it feels like all the answer options could be the right one, but you have to remember only one of them is the right answer and you have like a 3/4 chance of getting wrong.

In conclusion I feel like I deserve an 85 to 90, I know that next six week I can work myself up to a better grade hopefully.

Asynchronous Friday March 12

My thoughts about the book I choose to read were mainly focused on confusion since I really was lost in what was going on in the book and the different points of views that were being switched around. At the end when I was reading the Authors Note it felt like clarity was finally reaching me since it helped clear all the confusion the was filling my head since I couldn’t really figure out the whole plot of the story.

I thought at the the story and writing were kind of messy since it felt like I was just being stung along in so many directions and I was fighting to not be dragged on the ground. Not after being able to talk to my group I feel the the writing was messy, it was just written in a way to be perceived as messy to me. Why it felt messy to me is that I have read the Heroes of Olympus series and that is a really good at switch between points of view and keeps it simple to understand what is going on in the story. Now looking back the story is kind of sad to think about and just how it affects the characters differently.

For Pecola I felt bad for her since at the end she basically went insane trying to prove she had the bluest eyes in the world. I also felt bad for her since was raped by her own father and was forced to carry the baby, even though everyone else wanted the baby to die. When I fish meat the characters Claudia and Frieda I couldn’t really relate them so I honestly did care for the and athletic the end of the story were they were praying to Pecola’s baby to live I somehow felt that they redeemed themselves in my eyes. I actually like China,Poland,and Miss. Marie since they seemed like these wise and mysterious older ladies and then we find out that they basically are whores, and then I didn’t really know how to feel about that. I was like ‘oh, okay’ and just moved to the rest of the story. Maureen I kind of llooked her I guess it just she was like so much of a forgettable character for me, but I did remember her saying something about throwing the end of the cones out since there is a dead fly stick there. Soaphead Church I didn’t like him because he was like a frighten prick and a narcissist in my opinion and my opinion of hime just keep going down as I kept reading more about him. I especially hated him since he basically forced pecola to kill the old many dog that basically was dying, but still the little girl wanted blue eyes not kill a animal. Then he went a wrote a letter basically being like ‘Dear God, I know I paraded around pretending that I am actually religious. Even though I hate like all human except little girls who I like to touch. But today I had to do your job because this little black girl just wants blue eyes and that it, and you couldn’t even do that.’ I didn’t like Ms, Pauline/Polly at the end where she basically hates her daughter of the way she looks and is so rude to her. Though at first I kind of felt bad for her since she does have a deformed foot which makes her view herself as ugly. And Cholly I didn’t like him at all throught the story and he never really made himself able to be liked to me.

Why Read the Classics?

I did not agree with this essay mainly since it was to me proclaiming that any new book was never going to be anywhere near as good as a classic book in that genre. This irriatied memainly since that is purely on a matter of opioin and everyone’s opioin is different. I is unfair to assume that everyone is going to have the same experiences as you do. While there are some parts that I might agree with like number 4 be “4) Every rereading of a classic is as much of a voyage of discovery as the first reading”. I only agree with this because there are some books I would call classics since they were probably the first books or series that actually stuck with that I enjoyed. But they are not referred to as classics by the international stage for books. I mainly feel as a talking point that this could be a touchy subject since some people might hate reading books, fell out of loveing reading or whatever it maybe be, so it might bring at lot of different emotions never mind feelings when someone might ask them this.

Update Brag Sheet

Two academic/personal accomplishments I am proud of are my media tech movies and films that I made even though I could go back and edit them to look at least nicer. Why I am proud of them is mainly because I made them myself and much less edited them myself. I am also proud of my digital art pieces since I did start actually getting into them this year and I grew a lot doing them and the pieces are getting better.

Some of my academic strengths I would say are my critical thinking skills, open-mindedness,and being kind and friendly to people. Some of my weaknesses are procrastination, a bit of stubbornness and Impatience.

The class I enjoyed the most were probably History and or Art. Art mainly since it was kind of a way to de stress besides being a fun and chill class. History since depending on how the teacher is teaching it, the subject that we learn can be pretty interesting and not that boring. Math is pretty difficult. I would say it is not really my strong suit. I take it since it is one of my core classes.

One of my greatest personal strengths I would say is my ability to go with the flow, and be flexible. Sincere ~ because I try my best to give my honest opinion even though sometimes it may not always be the best. Unassuming~ I am wanting to try not to be the asshole who knows everything when I actually don’t, or the person who is super arrogant that no one wants to work with. Adaptable~ I am always trying to be the person who is flexible and ready to work with anything thrown at me. I would say My friends would describe me using these adjectives.I try my best to be either impartial or diplomatic in an argument that I just walked into. I try my best to be straightforward with people.

Coach Brown because I have known her since 6th grade and she was my advisory teacher also in sixth grade. Or Mr. Smith I would say since I actually have been in his class or almost 3 years now so I would say either him or Mr. Soden. Why I picked Mr. Smith is in his class for more than just one year mainly since after I was in a class I mainly never visit the teacher again. I think they would say I am pretty hard working though sometimes I do slack off. I think they probably say that I am sincere. I do try my best in every class that I am in to be open and genuine in how I feel. I think they probably would say a bit persistent. I’m not sure though but I am kind of persistent when I have an idea and I want to do it and or finish it. 

Something that is not really known about me is that when I was younger I played a lot of sports actually. When I  was a little kid I played soccer then I quit because I think my mom didn’t like the coach or something, then I got into volleyball because of watching the Summer olympics when I was like 4 or 8 years old, And finally  played a bit of basketball when I was like 10.

Dear Ms. L/Reflection Letter

I believe I deserve an and 85 to a 89. I have been doing work for English even though I haven’t been turn my work in. I have been doing my work and the citizen essay was pretty hard since I wasn’t really sure that was even my best essay writing so far, I honestly feel like I could do better but like on a different topic.

These semester have been a little hard kicking bad habits since we are all not in person. I feel little better that I am reading a little more, even though they are for school. As a writer I think I progressed a little bit more since the last update even though it during class. For reaching my goals in reading I would like to say I am slowly reaching there. I kind of feeling like my learning has grown mainly for writing since I have more experience with it, but for the triangle thing, it’s more like I understand it’s purpose but I really don’t see it’s use. The triangle thingy kind of help of the essay not going to lie. I feel like I have grown an honest hatred of actually reading book or listening to anything to something other than music or youtube. So I grown a bit of a hatred of reading my books but I push through mainly since I want a good grade, except on my choice reading book for silent reading time in class though I probably like at halfway to near 3/4 of the way done.

Though for writing as a whole I feel like I have gotten better it just that I kind of feel like you leave us floundering. Like when you first introduced us the assertions writing. I was all like wtf is an assertion? Ms. Walker as never uttered a word about assertion to us but then again all I remember was about little prince and posionwood bible. I kind of feel like if you are going to introduce us to a new type of writing for use maybe just us a piece that is in that style or links or something that we can use to help us. Compared to my first assertion I felt I have grown a lot for writing assertion that I might confidently say I can probably write a better assertion now. Though I do fear the future of this class because I am waiting for the other shoe to drop and that other shoe is writing poetry. I will be honest and say I don’t think my poetry skills are that good mainly since I never actually use them outside of the classroom so I never feel the need for them. I am sorry to say I probably have grown a hatred for writing poetry. Though I am a little partial to reading poetry as long as it is good or funny poetry.

As I feel for as a student not very well since I am really a procrastinator, and I am trying to use my Asynchronous time wisely but sometimes I just focus on something else and then totally forget what I was supposed to do. For how I want these next semester to go I want to make them better all around, but I need to set more realistic goals so for asynchronous time mainly trying to focus on staying to task until I finish the assignment. Now I feel like I almost got it but I am still totally working on it, since as the saying goes practice makes perfect.

In conclusion I feel like I deserve an 85 to an 89, I know that next semester I can work myself up to a better grade hopefully. Mainly by using my Asynchronous time wisely and staying on task, as well as turning stuff in. I could also work on my reading habits, as well as kicking my bad reading habits out. Not sure I will be kicking my bad habits out since school kind of killed my love of reading by forcing me to read so many books to be honest.